After reading the story and giving a few more examples of haikus, I took the children on a hike on the school grounds. I told them to write any ideas they could think of while observing their surroundings. I told them to focus on movement (i.e.,swaying), color, shape, feel, etc. I was amazed at the number of things they were able to find: lilacs, blackberry bushes, spiders, robins, butterflies, forget-me-nots, poison ivy (on the other side of the playground fence near the fields), ants, cherry trees, daisies, and so many other things.
When the hike was over we came back to the room and I gave the children a few minutes to look over their notes and add to them. Then I went over the expectations of the haiku, stressing the syllables in each line (some children like to count the words instead). After that, the students began drafting their poems. Through several drafts, syllable checks, format checks, and spelling checks, all of the students were able to publish a haiku with an illustration. Below you will find a few examples:
If you can't read it, it says: Daisy Soft as a blanket. White, yellow, green. Colorful. Swaying in the breeze. |
This one says: Hostas Soft green and white leaves. The back of the leaf is rough. They are small and wide. |
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